Today in writing we were learning to use WOW words to recraft our writing and make it more interesting. Check out our great writing.
There I was on the edge of the cliff with my best friend, my palms were sweaty, little rocks tumbled down from the cliff. I 've agreed to do a deer, to jump 60m off the edge of the cilff. I took my last breath and flew into the freezing icy water. (by Emily and Elena) The frightened boy plunged his fishing rod into the black cark pit of doom where noone has been before. (by Kahn) The old flimsy raft went crashing down the cold icy waterfall with brave people on board. (by Marina) The young boy waited patiently as his hook searched the sea bed for a massive hungry fish. (by Will) The midnight black wolf howled like an angel as the stars shimmered like diamonds in the dark sky, the moon was bright like dominos and the grassy hills looked like bundles of hay. As the mother finished howling her pups yelped like hyenas (By Sienna) The yellow raft zoomed down the clear blue, glistening in the sunlit waterfall (by Catherine).
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